5/20/10

English

My Top Sentences

1) One must be accountable for their actions; one must realize that decisions have consequences; one must live with the outcome. I think this is one of my best sentences this year because it is very clear and strait forward, there is no confusion in this line. 3/10/10

2) It's what's inside that counts, it's what's inside that matters, it's what's inside that's true. I really like this sentence because its meaning is true and important; it states what is really important about a person. 10/21/09

3) -I am shy, there is no denying this, but I continuously try to conquer my timidness everyday. I feel this sentence is one of my best because it clearly describes my personality the most. It states the truth. 10/20/09

4)The evening news always seems to find the bad in the world, “I make my living off the evening news, just give me something –something I can use. People love it when you lose, they love dirty laundry. –Don Henley) 5/6/10 English Mr.Salsich Finding the Good: A Response to Valentine for Ernest Mann.

“This is by far one of my favorite sentences out of all my essays this year because of the quote by Don Henley . I think it described the theme of finding the beauty in something perceived to be ugly; I think the quote was blended in nicely.”

5) People like the Ewells who were so dishonest, so cruel, so evil, are hard to forgive. (Tricolon) 3/10/10

English Mr. Salsich Forgiveness: A Hard Thing To Do

“I especially like this sentence because of the purposeful and meaning tricolon. I like the way this sentence flows with no error or quirks.”

6) I must say, I was scared to be captured or killed, but was more afraid to be forgotten. Thursday, February 25, 2010

After carefully reading over this sentence I concluded it was worthy of one of my best because of its uniqueness. This sentences sums up a whole essay assignment in eighteen words, and really cuts to the meaning of the paper without sugarcoating it.

I’ve learned that when I sit inside and watch T.V all day, I feel stale and lethargic, but once outside in the fresh air, I feel refreshed. 5/17/2010 This I Believe : A essay about the Outdoors I really like this sentence because of its long lenth and the words I used. I feel my word choise was very apropeate for the sentence.

Just being outside, just being in fresh air, just being active, feels great.(alliteration) 5/17/2010 This I Believe : A essay about the Outdoors , I think this sentence deserves the tittle of “Best Sentences” because of it’s great example of alliteration. I feel this sentence is one of my very strongest this whole year.

CM-I am a calm river, not fast, and no rapids, just taking my time. Wednesday, December 9, 2009

To Kill A Mocking Bird: Metaphors Sam 12/9/09

I really like this sentence because it displays a very nice metaphor that I took my time writing and blending into the paper.

Paris, a wealthy, handsome man, is trying to hurry love, but he will just have to wait.

4/8/10 English Mr. Salsich You Can’t Hurry Love: You Will Just Have To Wait

I think this sentence deserves a spot in my top 10 favorite sentences because it is a excellent example of appositive. It is clear and really flows nicely without any awkward spots.