Dear Reader,
In my blog you will read a multi-genre essay about the feeling of being forgotten. In this essay, you will read an expository paragraph, first person story, haiku, and a poast card.
Enjoy,
Sam
Forgotten- 8 Sentence Expository Paragraph
TS-The word forgotten, shows up many times in the last chapters of the book To Kill a Mocking Bird. SD- The word forgotten has affected alot of people in the book, especially Bob Ewell. CM-When Mr. Ewell first won his court case against Tom Robinson and Atticus, he was famous in Maycomb, however, his fame soon wore off.CM- For example, “Mr. Ewell found himself as forgotten as Tom Robinson”. CM-Mr.Ewell hated it when his fame slowly faded away.SD-While most of the town forgets about Mr. Ewell and Tom, there are some people who will not. CM-In chapter 27 it states, “But Tom was not forgotten by his employer, Mr. Link Deas”. CM-Even though most of the town forgot about Tom, there were still the few who will never forget him. SD-When I think of the word forgotten, I think of the beach.CM- When you make marks in the sand they are eventually washed away. CM-Just how the water washes away marks in the sand, time will wash away Tom Robinsons death. In time, the memory of Bob Ewell will fade. CS- The only people that will remember Bob Ewell are the ones that were close to him, otherwise, he is washed away.
First Person Story
We were sent on a mission deep into the dense jungles and rolling hills, just my spotter and I, with the gear on our backs. This mission was by far the most dangerous adventure of my life. Our mission was to crawl our way into a heavily patrolled area and take out a general. The chance of us making it back without being killed or captured was slim to none. Our mission took place in the middle of the night. I must say, I was scared to be captured or killed, but was more afraid to be forgotten. The thought of me risking my life then dying for my country and being forgotten was terrifying.
Haiku
If you forget me
You forget our memories
You will forget us
Post Card-
Hey,
It’s been 60 years since we last saw each other. I have not forgotten you. You better not have forgotten me after all of our memories. We grew up together. We lived down the street from one another. We did everything together. Now we live in different time zones. Kind of crazy, I can no longer bike down the street to see you. Look forward to hearing from you
-Sam
Self Assessment- I think I did a pretty good job on my multi genre essay. I put a lot of time and effort into reading it over to check for mistakes. I don’t like my post card to much, I think I forced myself to do it just to get the fourth genre. I wish I spent some more time planning what I was going to write. Overall I think I did some good writing.
I really enjoyed the postcard it was very creative. I think you could make your Dear Reader note a little longer and there are a few spelling errors like "poak" when you meant post card. Also at the end of your first sentence in the Dear Reader note I think you meant to put forgotten at the end instead of "forgot".
ReplyDeleteI really liked your haiku, it had a lot of meaning in it which is hard to do in such a small poem. I think you should read over your work so that you catch small spelling errors. I also think you could have done more in your Dear Reader Note.
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